tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1907885067602758337.post2046025481139876217..comments2024-03-08T09:52:59.827-05:00Comments on Middle Passages: And Then What?Lizahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/16170701034715108039noreply@blogger.comBlogger8125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1907885067602758337.post-53684598501271874142010-05-22T14:08:21.951-04:002010-05-22T14:08:21.951-04:00you got to find out
data entry indiayou got to find out <br /><a href="http://www.bpojobsathome.com" rel="nofollow"> data entry india </a>prashanthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04583385332262124749noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1907885067602758337.post-2209452722427967912010-05-16T00:29:02.456-04:002010-05-16T00:29:02.456-04:00wow! i was hooked!
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best of luck with...wow! i was hooked!<br /><br />great job!!<br /><br />best of luck with all you do :DTaherehhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03111022596822176769noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1907885067602758337.post-87283767225097122582010-05-14T13:17:39.931-04:002010-05-14T13:17:39.931-04:00I would've totally left my lights on. Probably...I would've totally left my lights on. Probably with the car running too. She's much braver than me!Elana Johnsonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05877856005992028912noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1907885067602758337.post-85398788653274183892010-05-14T12:54:04.602-04:002010-05-14T12:54:04.602-04:00ok,,, you got me,, that worked ,well,, now,, you g...ok,,, you got me,, that worked ,well,, now,, you got to find out what/who that was,, hummm? :)glnrozhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12922837344762102334noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1907885067602758337.post-42530207105361807962010-05-14T07:53:30.067-04:002010-05-14T07:53:30.067-04:00I did feel the tension and kept waiting for someth...I did feel the tension and kept waiting for something to grab her. I think I might suggest a bit more at the end so it's not just a shadowy figure disappearing around the corner. Choose one thing that would make the figure more scary or menacing. Maybe it stands still as if watching her before turning to leave. Maybe it's not at the corner, but closer. Maybe...<br /><br />Helen<br /><a href="http://straightfromhel.blogspot.com" rel="nofollow">Straight From Hel</a>Helen Gingerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09794759602654727110noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1907885067602758337.post-13778461479501561222010-05-14T07:23:16.927-04:002010-05-14T07:23:16.927-04:00Oh gosh. I wanted to yell at her to go back to the...Oh gosh. I wanted to yell at her to go back to the car! She is one brave gal! :) Loved it Liza:)Tabitha Birdhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08196816108272065974noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1907885067602758337.post-33899651044937151362010-05-13T23:50:56.603-04:002010-05-13T23:50:56.603-04:00Spooky! I was holding my breath, really. You did a...Spooky! I was holding my breath, really. You did an excellent job of drawing out the tension, although I agree that cats wouldn't cause that kind of fear, but most of us would worry about unsavory people in a lonely, dark parking lot.Tricia J. O'Brienhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05993110400088806252noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1907885067602758337.post-39811946140038554882010-05-13T21:57:21.048-04:002010-05-13T21:57:21.048-04:00I love the tension that builds from the beginning ...I love the tension that builds from the beginning of this passage to the end. Who was the tall figure?!<br /><br />One thing that I wondered about was why she was panicking about a possible stray cat, racoon, or rat. If it were me, I wouldn't be as scared as she seemed to be about the thought of a stray cat or a rodent. Maybe there's a reason she's afraid of these creatures?<br /><br />I LOVE that you're brave and you put your writing out there for others to read and make comments on. Brava!Andriahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11399682348211528396noreply@blogger.com