tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1907885067602758337.post6769853552624991184..comments2024-03-08T09:52:59.827-05:00Comments on Middle Passages: Campaigner ChallengeLizahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/16170701034715108039noreply@blogger.comBlogger49125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1907885067602758337.post-20182283115486763392012-03-04T02:00:00.925-05:002012-03-04T02:00:00.925-05:00what a beautiful sad little tale. Loved reading it...what a beautiful sad little tale. Loved reading itSylviahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05519691494230856599noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1907885067602758337.post-74029311851386742752012-03-02T07:30:09.961-05:002012-03-02T07:30:09.961-05:00How sad, but lovely! Well done!How sad, but lovely! Well done!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09678216576112327332noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1907885067602758337.post-41011059724939795322012-03-01T23:23:12.239-05:002012-03-01T23:23:12.239-05:00You had such lovely visuals in this piece. I liked...You had such lovely visuals in this piece. I liked it =)Stephanie Allenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01258321385403403810noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1907885067602758337.post-56560268174955728832012-03-01T15:23:17.224-05:002012-03-01T15:23:17.224-05:00This is my second comment as google ate the first ...This is my second comment as google ate the first one. Hope this one goes better. <br /><br />I love the visuals in your story and think it well written. :)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1907885067602758337.post-3812252216613161772012-02-29T11:52:01.885-05:002012-02-29T11:52:01.885-05:00Nice entry. Love the imagery. = )
I'm #149
me...Nice entry. Love the imagery. = )<br /><br />I'm #149<br />melissamaygrove.blogspot.comMelissahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08516493326566981116noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1907885067602758337.post-90311937081512270992012-02-28T07:19:12.721-05:002012-02-28T07:19:12.721-05:00I'm not doing the challenge but thoroughly enj...I'm not doing the challenge but thoroughly enjoyed coming over and reading your entry!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1907885067602758337.post-83771291548680822212012-02-27T22:13:19.477-05:002012-02-27T22:13:19.477-05:00Lovely exploration of your character's situati...Lovely exploration of your character's situation. You used your 200 words to great effect.Elizabeth Twisthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03133959633383307056noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1907885067602758337.post-3283936716193520572012-02-27T16:22:43.111-05:002012-02-27T16:22:43.111-05:00Wow, that is powerful. I get a really clear impres...Wow, that is powerful. I get a really clear impression of Betta's pain. Well done!A.L. Sonnichsenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11358456786727534289noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1907885067602758337.post-58688258519602618802012-02-27T12:07:18.851-05:002012-02-27T12:07:18.851-05:00Beautiful imagery!
I think you'll love the c...Beautiful imagery! <br /><br />I think you'll love the challenge and all of the great folks you'll meet. One of the best blogfest 'things' going, in my humble opinion.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00273059558675234923noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1907885067602758337.post-12456920256225735772012-02-27T07:21:39.005-05:002012-02-27T07:21:39.005-05:00Bittersweet. Good job!!Bittersweet. Good job!!Traci Kenworthhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07336373871521363649noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1907885067602758337.post-27411249929935815192012-02-27T01:28:52.724-05:002012-02-27T01:28:52.724-05:00Beautiful imagery and language! Great job!Beautiful imagery and language! Great job!Amber Cliteshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00537436446374599840noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1907885067602758337.post-59506409903398635102012-02-26T23:27:11.010-05:002012-02-26T23:27:11.010-05:00Talk about being hit when you're down! Poor gi...Talk about being hit when you're down! Poor girl. I'd love to know what she does next :-)Sarah Tokeleyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13273148070092101085noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1907885067602758337.post-66935118049424133692012-02-26T13:07:15.378-05:002012-02-26T13:07:15.378-05:00Very cool use of color and the rich detail of your...Very cool use of color and the rich detail of your voice. <br />Hi from the campaign trail. :)Jennhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11673194757089411682noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1907885067602758337.post-37606595237941952812012-02-26T12:54:42.557-05:002012-02-26T12:54:42.557-05:00Very nice job on this piece. The use of the senses...Very nice job on this piece. The use of the senses is particularly compelling and I love the sense of brooding anger.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1907885067602758337.post-1568443949180454332012-02-25T13:01:27.738-05:002012-02-25T13:01:27.738-05:00Very well-written, introspective piece. You did a ...Very well-written, introspective piece. You did a great job conveying her love for her father, and the equal anger towards her mother, in the short space - palpable emotion in this. "His maxims had bobbed through her brain like a brook running downstream" - that's a great line. Well done!Nick Wilfordhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03841776353790635132noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1907885067602758337.post-65717146620639432822012-02-25T13:01:27.464-05:002012-02-25T13:01:27.464-05:00Very well-written, introspective piece. You did a ...Very well-written, introspective piece. You did a great job conveying her love for her father, and the equal anger towards her mother, in the short space - palpable emotion in this. "His maxims had bobbed through her brain like a brook running downstream" - that's a great line. Well done!Nick Wilfordhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03841776353790635132noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1907885067602758337.post-61571269710652746022012-02-25T12:05:08.295-05:002012-02-25T12:05:08.295-05:00Yes! A very compelling story. I want more...Yes! A very compelling story. I want more...Jan Morrisonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01771180344305042855noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1907885067602758337.post-27281134527188416512012-02-24T21:15:27.946-05:002012-02-24T21:15:27.946-05:00Very well done! I'm in your campaigner group, ...Very well done! I'm in your campaigner group, stopping by to say hello.Suhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11862479925124552922noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1907885067602758337.post-70291675536122304162012-02-24T14:55:35.268-05:002012-02-24T14:55:35.268-05:00Very vivid description. Nicely done.
I'm not s...Very vivid description. Nicely done.<br />I'm not sure how I vote though. I clicked on the page. Do I leave a comment there?Jennifer Shirkhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16970585847385511795noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1907885067602758337.post-21286965253440638362012-02-24T12:50:05.745-05:002012-02-24T12:50:05.745-05:00Nicely done.Nicely done.mshatchhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06308916014310536449noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1907885067602758337.post-24138823887236886412012-02-24T11:11:58.517-05:002012-02-24T11:11:58.517-05:00A very emotional piece. Well done. Great ending.A very emotional piece. Well done. Great ending.Kerri Cuevhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13305892536084882077noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1907885067602758337.post-29452981599754383542012-02-24T10:14:32.132-05:002012-02-24T10:14:32.132-05:00Loved your opening lines!
Sia McKye OVER COFFEELoved your opening lines!<br /><br /><a href="http://www.siamckye.blogspot.com" rel="nofollow">Sia McKye OVER COFFEE</a>~Sia McKye~https://www.blogger.com/profile/08470562659597351033noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1907885067602758337.post-9584148896027256772012-02-24T09:25:46.785-05:002012-02-24T09:25:46.785-05:00One of these day you will be published, Liza! I tr...One of these day you will be published, Liza! I truly mean that! The descriptions are excellent. So sad. I had tears. Do you write short stories? I can't remember if you do or not. You should. <br /><br />Voting. :-)Robyn Campbellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17356555082768185840noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1907885067602758337.post-29067562217327074592012-02-24T08:11:37.569-05:002012-02-24T08:11:37.569-05:00Very Vivid. I like this story!
TeresaVery Vivid. I like this story!<br /><br />TeresaT. Powell Coltrinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02160774009926623671noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1907885067602758337.post-5699310041697360732012-02-24T00:10:52.857-05:002012-02-24T00:10:52.857-05:00molten orange.
LOVE thatmolten orange.<br /><br />LOVE thatJolene Perryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14809468564016928636noreply@blogger.com