Oak trees swaying on a soft wind disguise themselves as birches today. Yesterday’s snow sticks like spray paint, trails of white flypaper hang in uneven strips from graying bark. They remind me of a spring day long ago, when aggravated; I sawed off a birch branch that blocked the view as we backed out of our driveway.
For one stunned moment I gaped as sap rained from the gash, a geyser of clear blood spurting from an amputated limb. As liquid pulsed from the open vein, I ran up the hill to the house, squeezing eyes tight to the unexpected wound my impatience had inflicted.
dont know if this just actually happened, but very direct and precise in its delivery (to me at least, very good, I am no critic,, lol)
ReplyDeleteThis actually happened Glen.
ReplyDeleteI thought you had just written this. This actually happened? Wow! =)
ReplyDeleteGreat imagery. It really put me in the moment.
ReplyDeleteOh wow! Great writing Liza. That actually happened? Double wow!
ReplyDeleteI totally identify with you. Seeing the tree bleed would have shocked me, too.
ReplyDeleteHelen
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