Monday, May 6, 2013

Ocular Spring

(Thanks to MCC for the inspiration.)
 
The windows are dirty.
But still, low in the sky,
a silver-sun cleans the edges,
the world sprayed with Windex,
polished hard with a soft cloth.
Out in the garden,
emerging stalks etch blue air,
like the first time
you don a pair of glasses, 
the new prescription
cuts a sharp line,
green leaves outlined
in fine-point ink.

Later in the car, 
you lumber down 
winter-pocked roads
where strobes flick and flash. 
Light
hits air,
hits trees
hits air.
You wish the visor hung lower,
for a baseball cap,
anything to block 
the brash blaze of horizon glare,
before trees leaf out and
tint the bleach with shade.
You squint
as back-light marries
a white magnolia
branches hanging heavy,
the way limbs do
during a wet spring snow.

Tomorrow, the light will change. 
A storm that never arrived,
but washed the air anyway,
will have floated out to sea. 
All you’ll have left
of an afternoon
burnished to high-gloss
are words that try —
reminding you, perhaps,
but forever failing to capture
anything close to the essence.

Copyright Liza Carens Salerno, May 2013

11 comments:

  1. Well your poetical words captured this fabulous moment of clarity most freshly! Yay! And you made Windex sound lovely! Well done you!

    take care
    x

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  2. thanks Liza - think you got this transcendent moment perfectly! What a lovely lovely poem.

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  3. Yes, you really captured the moment! Everything sharp and fresh.

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  4. In this case, the words captured the essence. Loved it.

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  5. I can really see the sky and feel the outside when I read this. Beautiful.

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  6. I love the imagery, especially with the glasses effect.

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  7. What beautiful imagery! You capture the atmosphere and feeling perfectly.

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  8. Great job, Liza! I couldn't agree more with the commenters above. You captured that certain feeling/moment beautifully.

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  9. My windows are dirty too, lol! I've managed to use some windex on a few I'll need help on the outside of most of my windows.

    Thanks for sharing a beautiful moment in time. :-)

    Sia McKye OVER COFFEE

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  10. Don't you wish you could capture in true color an afternoon or morning in a jar? Then, whenever you wanted, could peek in and remind yourself of how lovely the day was.

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