The windows are dirty.
But still, low in the sky,
a silver-sun cleans the edges,
the world sprayed with Windex,
polished hard with a soft cloth.
Out in the garden,
emerging stalks etch blue air,
like the first time
you don a pair of glasses,
the new prescription
cuts a sharp line,
green leaves outlined
in fine-point ink.
Later in the car,
you lumber down
winter-pocked roads
where strobes flick and flash.
Light
hits air,
hits trees
hits air.
You wish the visor hung lower,
for a baseball cap,
anything to block
the brash blaze of horizon glare,
before trees leaf out and
tint the bleach with shade.
You squint
as back-light marries
a white magnolia
branches hanging heavy,
the way limbs do
during a wet spring snow.
Tomorrow, the light will change.
A storm that never arrived,
but washed the air anyway,
will have floated out to sea.
All you’ll have left
of an afternoon
burnished to high-gloss
are words that try —
of an afternoon
burnished to high-gloss
are words that try —
reminding you, perhaps,
but forever failing to capture
anything close to the essence.
Copyright Liza Carens Salerno, May 2013
Copyright Liza Carens Salerno, May 2013
11 comments:
Well your poetical words captured this fabulous moment of clarity most freshly! Yay! And you made Windex sound lovely! Well done you!
take care
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thanks Liza - think you got this transcendent moment perfectly! What a lovely lovely poem.
Yes, you really captured the moment! Everything sharp and fresh.
In this case, the words captured the essence. Loved it.
Wow, you are a fantastic poet!
I can really see the sky and feel the outside when I read this. Beautiful.
I love the imagery, especially with the glasses effect.
What beautiful imagery! You capture the atmosphere and feeling perfectly.
Great job, Liza! I couldn't agree more with the commenters above. You captured that certain feeling/moment beautifully.
My windows are dirty too, lol! I've managed to use some windex on a few I'll need help on the outside of most of my windows.
Thanks for sharing a beautiful moment in time. :-)
Sia McKye OVER COFFEE
Don't you wish you could capture in true color an afternoon or morning in a jar? Then, whenever you wanted, could peek in and remind yourself of how lovely the day was.
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