We speak the language of stone.
Quartzite, granite, pumice, slate,
the eternal rake
the eternal rake
of tide
and sea.
and sea.
While we walk,
you point your cane,
you point your cane,
bottle caps, wires,
the rusted intestines
the rusted intestines
of lobster traps,
I fetch them,
I fetch them,
ridding the beach of
unwanted accessories.
At home, you pile stones
in plastic containers,
in plastic containers,
by the sink,
on the hutch,
on the hutch,
in a box stored
deep in the basement.
deep in the basement.
Now, you solicit requests,
and though
I remain voiceless,
I remain voiceless,
you know.
“Get the black stone,” you say.
We bring samples to your bedside,
malachite, jasper,
and a composite,
and a composite,
disparate forms,
fused together.
fused together.
Just as I realize
these stones
these stones
and love,
will last forever,
again you point.
This time, grey,
etched with striations.
etched with striations.
A heart rock, folded into itself,
pocket-sized,
with a hollow
with a hollow
just the right shape
to rub at with my thumb.
to rub at with my thumb.
19 comments:
That was very heartfelt. That's a special stone.
This is lovely.
wow - such spirit.
Beautiful, Liza. I especially like the visual of the "rusted intestines of lobster traps."
Beautifully done and very touching.
Did the stone inspire the poem or did the poem come first. It fits so perfectly.
I never thought of stones as "communication", but see differently now.
Wow! Lovely poem! And that picture goes with it perfectly. Thanks for sharing this with us! And thanks for visiting my co-host post over at Unicorn Bell. :)
Liza, those words have such depth and imagery. Lovely.
I don't know if what you were going for here was Comfort, but I feel like everything about it is meant to comfort. The familiar routine of finding new things. The stone collecting. Comforting a friend who is bedridden by bringing her favorite finds. There is comfort in their beauty, familiarity, texture. Touchstones for our hearts.
Wow! I know that sometimes it is a long time between poems but when you get up to bat you hit it out of the park! Love this!
Very tender and visual. I was walking along with you, and under my thumb another stone of remembrance.
Such lovely words. You are a true wordsmith!
What a beautiful poem. Especially nice since I love rocks too.
Very, very nice. Beautiful writing, loved it!
A beautiful poem, Liza, and it describes a beautiful friendship.By the way, THIS Susan and her hubby collect rocks, too, so I especially appreciated your poem.
Happy weekend!
So very lovely. I carry a small heart-shaped stone my brother gave to me. He found it while we walked together upon the Atlantic shore of France. I cherish it. Thank you so much for sharing this poem, and the images and thoughts/emotions. Also, thanks for visiting and commenting on my blog...
The perfect poem for the perfect stone.
This is lovely and moving, Liza. Well done!
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