This month, its all about the question: How has being a writer changed your experience as a reader?
In high school, I took a creative writing class taught
by a poet during which we had to
keep a writing journal we passed in every couple of weeks for grading. We’d get it back with comments in the margins.
During a study hall one day, I was writing my journal
and I happened to look out the window to see bare trees, which led to a little
poem that started something like this: “The spindly fingers of the leafless
tree stretch into a sunless sky…
I didn’t give the poem another thought until I received my
journal back from the teacher after the next grading cycle. Beside that first
line of the poem she’d written: “I wish I wrote that.” Given that I remember it all these years later, I guess you could say I was tickled.
That little story sums up how writing has changed my
experience as a reader. I constantly stop, reread, marvel and think, “I wish I
wrote that.”
Take this gem from the book I’m currently reading,
Mother of Pearl, by Melinda Haynes. At the top of page two, I had to stop
because of this:
He had never known such
colors. Never dreamed brown was such a
rainbow. He’d always thought of brown as brown, the color or burnt toast or
worn-out shoes. But after months on end he’d learned to parcel out the values
into new shades fast approaching the limit of his imagination—Ten-minute Tea.
Steeped-Too-Long Tea. Barely Tea. Wet Bark.
Sun-Baked Bark. Old-as-Sin
Bark. Old Soggy Leaves. Just-Dropped Leaves. Fresh Wet Leaves. And these were just the browns. He had yet to
go on to green, which he was just now beginning to see. Mother of Pearl by Melinda Haynes.
It strikes me that in order to write about colors that way, the author had to see them that way, somehow, somewhere, and then translate it into words. Oh, yes. I'd be over the moon if I came up with something like that.
How brilliant one must be to create even a single paragraph
remotely resembling the one above. I respect that talent. I strive for that
skill. And yet, even if I never make it,
it’s all good.
At the very least, reading good writing feeds my soul.
15 comments:
I'd say you came really close. That was quite a compliment. And you know you have it in you to write more like that.
Loved that, Liza: "Reading good writing feeds my soul." It feeds mine too! I wish I had written it. Enjoy visiting around on IWSG Wednesday!
Hi Liza - fascinating and now wonder you remember her compliment. Love the thought of those colours ... browns ... wonderful description ... learning new and creative concepts ... Keep going and good luck - have confidence .. cheers Hilary
Yes, good writing definitely spurs me on to do better myself. Thanks for sharing!
Yes, good writing definitely spurs me on to do better myself. Thanks for sharing!
When I'm reading a good novel I do not notice the writing. Just like if I'm watching a good film I don't notice the camera work. If I'm reading essays or poetry I do notice the writing in quite a different way. I will think on this some more.
I love your poetry and not surprised one bit that your teacher was envious of your line. I've felt that before when reading you!
Love this post, Liza! And you're right - even if we never achieve that talent, that skill, we still get to read the works of those who can, who do. And our souls will be better for it. :)
You are a beautiful writer. I often (silently) envy the way you lay down words. And...I hear you when it comes to reading something and wishing I could write like that. Steinbeck did that to me all the time. And Gibran.
I like this post a lot. Indeed, I love when you read a passage or an author and you just have to pause and reflect. I try to not be super picky when I read - I just want to escape. But I do notice quality.
As a writer, I am more critical of myself (as we all are) - we want the reader to have that pause...that moment of wow.
You are there ( I think) in many of your poems and posts - you truly put in the word effort and it shows
What a great compliment you received! It's no wonder you still remember it. That's awesome.
I had a teacher like that and I think that was the start of it. Great description of brown. I wanted to read about green.
I often have thought that. I wish I had written a lot of things so I keep plugging away and trying to get better.
Yes, when I think "I wish I'd wrote that" then that is my aspiration. To have this said about ones own writing is a good reason to keep writing. A moment of brilliance is wonderful, but those moments give us something to strive for in our stretches of more mundane writing.
Arlee Bird
Tossing It Out
I agree--so many times I have had that same feeling that I wish I had written something that I read. I think reading helps enrich my writing too because it often offers up a new perspective for me.
That's awesome.
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